帮忙修改一下英文

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/09/23 07:16:51
本文以若干能体现英语语言丰富性和时代性的广告案例出发,并在此基础上,深入研究分析了广告英语的特征、形式和功能
The article researches and analyses deeply the characteristics, forms and functions of the advertising English based on the practical advertising English.

主要修改based on 后面的部分

首先,本文个人认为用this paper比较好,一下是我改的
Oriented and based on the diversity and temporal English advertising, this paper gives a further and deeper analysis on the features, forms and functions of English advertising.