英语作文 业余爱好

My Hobby
My hobby is watching movies,especially western ones. After a long day and tiring study, i would isolate myself from the outer world, immersed in the movie world.
Watching movies is a joyful thing. In the first hand, i can enjoy the plots of the movies, intricate or sophisticated, that attract me lot. Secondly, when enjoying western ones, i can learn the western cultures. By means of it, i touch the western world. Last but not the least, i can share the feelings of the actors and actresses.
So watching movies really enriches my life.

上面的作文写的挺好的，我参考了一下。下面是我自己写的。
My Avocation(业余爱好）
No one can deny that doing something you like will realse people body well.There are various of hobbies.Someone like sports,but others chooce to spend time on music.For myself,I would like to watch films after heavy work.
Life Becomes Colourful with avocation.As all may know,there are a good quantity of movies,for instance,in Chines