UC知道找英语语法错误
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/23 20:48:12
作文如下：
In the 2008 Spring Festival has snowstorm. Snowstorm has brought many troubles such as the house collapsed, the train could not run, and so on. There are many disaster areas without water and electricity, their lives difficult. The Chinese government has given them to help. We are also extending a helping hand. Because we know Many hands make light work.
帮忙找下。
In the 2008 Spring Festival has snowstorm. Snowstorm has brought many troubles such as the house collapsed, the train could not run, and so on. There are many disaster areas without water and electricity, their lives difficult. The Chinese government has given them to help. We are also extending a helping hand. Because we know Many hands make light work.
帮忙找下。
开头 ：On the Spring Festival of 2008,there was a snowstorm.
第二句has--had
house 前面的the去掉
and so on 去掉（与前面的such as 重复）
their lives 前面加and （逗号不能连接两个句子）
difficult 前面加 are （句子缺少谓语）
to help 中的to 去掉 （give sb sth）
hand---hands
最后一句改成这样比较好 Because we know more hands make lighter work