帮忙检查英语语法错误~~急用~

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“Oh! My God!” I seemed to have slept for a long time. My clothes were wet and torn and my head throbbed with pain. “Am I dreaming?” I asked myself. But seconds later, I memorized all the things.
When I took salves to Brazil. There was a great storm and the boat turned over. My companions all die. Only I survived. I was very afraid and felt lonely. When I lay on the earth, I began to think over my life that I have spent---I was born in 1632 and I have a happy childhood and a perfect family. My father told me that if I stayed at home my life would be easy and pleasant. But I wanted to go to sea. That is my dream, and I wanted to realize my dream. Consequently, I ran off to sea. After three times sail, as my father said, the bad things happened. But I believe that I will never regret sailing.
Next day, I swam to the ship. I wanted to find something to help me live longer. I loaded the raft with foods, clothes; tools, guns, and bullets, all packed in wooden boxes. I hunt, grew

“Oh! My God!” I seemed to have slept for a long time. My clothes were wet and torn and my head throbbed with a pain. “Am I dreaming?” I asked myself. But seconds later, I memorized all the things.
When I took a salve to Brazil,there was a great storm and the boat turned over. My companions were all dead except me. I was very afraid and felt lonely. Lying on the beach, I began to recognize the life I spent---I was born in 1632 and had a happy childhood with a perfect family. My father told me that my life would be easy and pleasant if I stayed at home . But I wanted to go to sea. That is my dream, and I'm eager to make it true. Consequently, I ran off to sea. After three times sailing, as my father said, bad things happened. But I believed that I would never regret sailing.
The next day, I swam to the ship. I wanted to find something helping me live longer. I loaded the raft with foods, clothes, tools, guns, and bullets, all packing in wooden boxes. I hunt, grew cor