UC知道英语语法检查
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/30 05:04:13
帮忙检查一下这篇中国式英语的语法，并帮忙改正一下，谢谢了。
Good morning , honorable judges .It’s my honor to be here .First of all ,thank you for giving me the chance to stand here expressing myself . I am a student in Xing'an No.2 primary school. Today, my topic is ‘The Olympic spirit will be in China forever’.
Since I know Beijing has got the host of 2008 Olympic games .I’m looking forward to the days of august 8th 2008, the day Beijing Olympic games will be opened ,the day sports family will gather in Beijing ,the day all the Chinese will feel proud .
What an exciting moment it will be!
I know the Olympic motto is ‘higher, faster, stronger. ’This spirit has spread all over the world. It has brought china more benefits.
First, as the host for Olympic Games, Beijing has carried out large-scale urban construction .This will accelerate Beijing’s space of modern international metropolis.
Second, the Beijing Olympic bid has allowed the Beijing’s environment more beautifu
Good morning , honorable judges .It’s my honor to be here .First of all ,thank you for giving me the chance to stand here expressing myself . I am a student in Xing'an No.2 primary school. Today, my topic is ‘The Olympic spirit will be in China forever’.
Since I know Beijing has got the host of 2008 Olympic games .I’m looking forward to the days of august 8th 2008, the day Beijing Olympic games will be opened ,the day sports family will gather in Beijing ,the day all the Chinese will feel proud .
What an exciting moment it will be!
I know the Olympic motto is ‘higher, faster, stronger. ’This spirit has spread all over the world. It has brought china more benefits.
First, as the host for Olympic Games, Beijing has carried out large-scale urban construction .This will accelerate Beijing’s space of modern international metropolis.
Second, the Beijing Olympic bid has allowed the Beijing’s environment more beautifu
我个人觉得文章不怎么样。不过如果是小学生写出来的就很不错了。很多语法错误而且比较中国式，叫人帮你修改一下啦。
我觉得不错, 只是第一, 第二,第三...第五那样列下去有点...说不上, 反正如果你把那五点连在一起(不列点)说会自然些, 当然这是我的一点意见.