中译英翻译,谢谢!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/07 09:44:15
中文:
从6月9日起,PB,MR,MA所有店铺对VIP客人打7折,6月16日起对所有客人打7折.

英语怎么翻译更书面语,更商业用语?

All the branches/chains of PB,MR,MA will give a 30% off to the VIP members since June 9,and the same discount will be available to all since June 16.

from 9 JUNE, PB,MR,MA all has 30% discounts for VIP,from 16 JUNE has 30% discount for everyone.

From 9th June,all stores of PB,MB and MA offer VIP customers discount by 30%. and to all customers from 16th of June.