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I was very excited at the news Chang'e I satellite was launched successfully yesterday.I was jumed with joy and couldn't hold back
my tears while watching TV.China successful launch of Chang'e I
satellite is great contribution to mandind's"peaceful development
of space".Chang'e I satellite is a lunar exploration satellite.
It will collect lunar surface data,such as the gravity field and
environment of the moon and so on.Fly to the moon is the nation's
long cherished dream,because Chang'e has been worshipped as
the "moon lady" for thousands of years.That's really encouraged!
We feel very pride that China's space program has entered a new stage.
my tears while watching TV.China successful launch of Chang'e I
satellite is great contribution to mandind's"peaceful development
of space".Chang'e I satellite is a lunar exploration satellite.
It will collect lunar surface data,such as the gravity field and
environment of the moon and so on.Fly to the moon is the nation's
long cherished dream,because Chang'e has been worshipped as
the "moon lady" for thousands of years.That's really encouraged!
We feel very pride that China's space program has entered a new stage.
总的来说，文章内容写得不错．
找了以下4点供参考：
1. jumed 拼错了，不应被动式
2 great contribution 名词作表语，是否加个冠词
3 mandind 拼错了
4 encouraged，物作主语时，应用现在分词，与interest 一样