英语汉译英句子

My parents are on holiday this week. (Actually use "on vacation" is better.)
She is going to do some shopping on Friday while her younger sister going to concert. ( Actually use " go shopping" is better.)
I always go for a walk after supper.

My parents are going on a holiday this now
我认为这里要用进行时 因为on holiday 表示正在度假

She did some shopping on Friday, and her sister
listened to the concert
这句用过去式
I often go for a walk after meal
这句用一般现在时

还是认为 第一句改成这样更合题意

My parents are on holiday this week

.我的父母在这星期外出度假去了。（on holiday )
My parents are on holiday this week.
她周五去购物，她的妹妹去听音乐会了。（do some shopping）
She went to do some shopping Friday and her sister went to a concert.
我常常在饭后散步。（go for a walk）
I always go for a walk after supper .

My parents went on vacation this week
she did do some shopping on Firday,her sister went to the concert
I always go for a wal