帮我看看这个英文感谢信有没有错。

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/21 18:39:32
Dear Mrs Zuo,
Thanks for teaching us English two years.We learned lots of things.Now you are going to retire.
We hope that you have no more worries and keep in good heath.
Yours,
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我们英语老师就要退休了,因为她颈椎不舒服,所以我们送一个保健枕头,这个是感谢信,麻烦各位看看有没有错,告诉我落款怎么写,我们06-4班班费买的,也算全体师生送的吧。 谢谢啦!

Thanks for teaching us English FOR two years.We learned lots of things.Now you are going to retire.
We hope that you have no worries and keep heathy.
Yours students
best wishes

two years 前面要加for,We learned不行,要完成时态have learned,Now去掉因为是将来时,worry貌似不能作名词,我也想不出你自己换一个吧,落款就写:Students and teachers in Class Four, Grade Six,Yours去掉