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A happy day
Today is Saturday. I have a happy day. At a half past seven, my mum, my dad, my sister and I go to the zoo by car. Come in the zoo. First, I see a lovely bird on an old woman’s shoulder .It’s interesting. I’m speaking to my sister:” Do you like this bird? Dear sister?” “Yes, I like this very much.” Then, we come to the “Monkey’s House”. There are many monkeys are jumping up and down. Suddenly, a thin monkey jumps on the small hill. All of us are laughing. Then, we see the giraffe eats tender leaf from the tree highly. We really are happy.
有错，最好指出，或帮我重写一遍
Today is Saturday. I have a happy day. At a half past seven, my mum, my dad, my sister and I go to the zoo by car. Come in the zoo. First, I see a lovely bird on an old woman’s shoulder .It’s interesting. I’m speaking to my sister:” Do you like this bird? Dear sister?” “Yes, I like this very much.” Then, we come to the “Monkey’s House”. There are many monkeys are jumping up and down. Suddenly, a thin monkey jumps on the small hill. All of us are laughing. Then, we see the giraffe eats tender leaf from the tree highly. We really are happy.
有错，最好指出，或帮我重写一遍
There are many monkeys are jumping up and down. 错了
应该是There are many monkeys jumping up and down.
快乐的一天今天是saturday . 我有一个愉快的一天. 在7时30分,我妈,我爸,妹妹和我去动物园的车. 来到了动物园. 首先,我看到一个可爱的鸟对一个老女人的肩膀. 然而,有趣的. 我代表我的姐姐说: "您喜欢这种鸟类? 亲爱的妹妹? " "是的,我想这是很. "然后,我们来到"猴之家" . 还有许多猴子上下跳跃. 突然,一个瘦小的猴子跳的小山丘. 大家都开怀大笑. 然后,我们看到的长颈鹿吃嫩叶的树木高度评价. 我们真的很高兴.