帮我看看有没有错 英语短文

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Bill was ill and he wents to see(用不用写saw）the doctor。The doctor examined Bill’s body.Then,he gaves Bill some medicine.
He said to Bill:drink some water and you will be all right soon.
The Bill wents home and took the medicine with a glass of water.

1.he wents 改成he went
2.不用saw,用see就可以了.
3.gaves改成gave
4.The Bill wents改成The Bill went

评价:本文有一个多处犯的错误就是在动词转变成过去式后不用跟着人称变化了,即过去式中不存在单数第三人称的变化.

Bill was ill and he (went) to see(不用写saw）the doctor。The doctor examined Bill’s body.Then,he (gave) Bill some medicine.
He said to Bill( ,)"drink some water and you will be all right soon."
(Then) Bill (went) home and took the medicine with a glass of water.