简短的征求意见的邮件

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想写封邮件，问问经理对我工作的看法，因为我们平时不会聊到这些，也从未聊过。我draft了一封：
I have joined our company over half a year, could you give a view of my work, and then give me some suggestions?
我觉得内容或语法上可以做一些修改，请教各位怎么表达效果会好一些。

i have been working in our company for half a year,could you please tell me your opinion on my work and give some suggestions?
用现在完成进行时表示持续到现在并且有可能继续进行的动作~!

I have been here more than half year(半年，one and half years是一年半，我不知道你说是哪个）, Would you please give me some suggestions about my job? Thank you so much.

不要一字一句的翻译，晕乎乎。

Dear [ ]:

I have been with the company more than half year, I wonder how am doing. It would be wonder if you can give me some suggestions. I appreciate your time and opinions.

sincerely,

your name