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Hello everyone:
My name is Mike.I am 15 years old.I am a little shy.I am interested in listening to music.I like chatting with my friends on the Internt. I think the most important thing for me is to have a great number of friends. I hope I can become your friend soon.Thank you!
如果发现有错误、不妥的地方请指出，并写出改正后的句子。谢谢。
My name is Mike.I am 15 years old.I am a little shy.I am interested in listening to music.I like chatting with my friends on the Internt. I think the most important thing for me is to have a great number of friends. I hope I can become your friend soon.Thank you!
如果发现有错误、不妥的地方请指出，并写出改正后的句子。谢谢。
internet拼错啦
I hope I can become your friend soon （can最好用will,因为can表示能力，并不能直接按中文的想法翻译）
完全正确 没错
没问题···
基本没有错误。
但是最好不要每句话都是I打头，会略显单调……