帮我改改错误

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In my spare time, I like to watch television, read and listen to music, I like to look at each type of book. I like to watch the TV relaxed and happy, and listen to pure music, of course, I will do some other I like Things, but I still prefer to most of the time sleeping to pass the time

In my spare time, I like to watch television, read and listen to music, I like to read all kinds of books. I like to watch TV programs that make me relaxed and happy, and listen to
light music, of course, I will do some other things, but I still prefer to spend most of the time sleeping for most of the free time every day.

1,“看书”不能用look at,应该用read.
2,“看什么样的电视节目”不能用watch the TV,而是watch the humour programs
3，I will do some other I like things.此句不通顺。我还会做一些其他我喜欢做的事。应该说，I would do other things I like.
4,太啰嗦了。用了很多，I like ......I like ......I like ......而且整体看上去很不协调。没有过度，就好像是在说“我今天买了一双新鞋，我今天看到一直公鸡在打鸣，我今天很累。”这是一个个句子构成的话，但不是连贯的一段话。所以，你应该尽量减少重复。并且加上AND，therefore，so等等。

read 后加books
look at 改成 read
relaxed---relaxing
of course 后改成 i will do something else i like,but i still prefer to sleep at most of the time.
你的英语语法不是很好哦。

一楼的蛮好的，【I like to watch TV programs that make me relaxed and happy】这句翻译得很好哈，简单明了。个人意见。pure music 也可以说成soft music