帮我改错，耶(群芳阁)

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My name is Alison ,i'm 21 years old .I'm from liaoning , i graduated from senior high school .I have an outing personality .
I also have a large number of interests in travelling sporting playing and so on . My hobby is math ,but i hard to improving my english by myself .I told myself if i do ,i'll do the best .
I believed Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind on it .
thanks

outing personally ---> outgoing personally
a large number of interests --> wide range of interest
travel, sports and so on - 不用 sports playing 的
i hard --> it's difficult for me
i believed 应该 i believe 较好，难道 你现在不信了吗 ?

outing--gout going
but i hard ---but I find it hard improving

My name is Alison,21 years old ,and graduated from senior high school which is in the city of liaoning.
I have an outgoing personality,and have a large number of interests ,such as travelling sports and so on .Math is my best love,but it is difficult for me to improve my english .I will do the best whatever anything.And I believe nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind on it .
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