UC知道帮忙改改作文。。拜托啦
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One day,a farmer works on his farm .suddenly,a big rabbit bumping into a tree trump,the farm who think it is a unexpected gift,he takes the rabbit to his home and eat this delicious,after that peculiar day,the farmer stay under the tree every day want to get another rabbit,,throw his hoe and give up his field. The story which about the rabbit and farmer wants tell us do not believe opportunity and destiny but do not gain by working,the farm whose behavior is very foolish
1.要改成过去式
2.第一行：bumping改成bumped
3.第二行：第一个逗号改成句号； the farm who think it is a unexpected gift改成 The farmer thought it was a unexpected gift,逗号改成句号
第三行：eat this delicious最好改成had a delicious meal然后句号
第四行：want前面加个逗号，在把want改成wanting
前面就改到这里，后面实在太乱，我没办法改
后话：小朋友，你的英语是典型的中国英语啊，语法知识真的是very little啊，我真的有种冲动想帮你重写啊，你平时要多看点范文和语法书，不然你的老师也会被你累死的。
叙述故事，应该用过去时态
One day,a farmer was working on his farm .
Suddenly,a big rabbit bumped into a tree trump,
the farmer who thought it was an unexpected gift took the rabbit to his home and ate it ,
after that peculiar day,the farmer stayed under the tree every day in order to get another rabbit.He threw his shoe and gave up his field.
The story which talk about the rabbit and the farmer wants to tell us not only to believe opportunity and destiny .We should gain by working.the farmer whose behavior was very foolish.
呵呵,粗略改了一下.
大家在此基础上,再继续改改吧.
团结力量大嘛...呵呵.
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