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Susan lost her leg because of a traffic accendent.Once a time,she didn’t know how to face up to the fact that she couldn’t walk again.
One day,Susan was attract by a real story when she scan the book.The story vivid described a disabled after reading the book,shemade up her mind to read more books,what’s more,she also wanted to write a story about her chilhood.Susanbecame believe that she will living as a useful person finally.
就是这篇,把错误该了就好了,谢谢了。我会追分的,在线等。

Susan lost her leg because of a traffic accendent.For a long time,she didn’t know how to face the fact that she couldn’t walk again.
Until one day,Susan was attracted by a real story when she read a book.The story vividly described a disabled person. After reading the book,she made up her mind to read more books;in addition,she also wanted to write a story about her chilhood.Susan started to believe that she will eventually live as a useful person.