英语老师请进..改改这英语作文

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Dear Editor,
I am glad to read the article called Jolin Tsai'snEW Book: OUT NOW! I am very impressed.
I want to share my learn my learning way with you.It's important to learn English from you.
First,Iw rite down important point in my notebook.Such, I can strengthen memory.Second,If I have any question ,I ask my classmates and teacher.Third,I keep a diary every week.To train grammar better.
I hope my method will able to help you.

1.I am very impressed 改成it impresses me a lot.
2.called 应改成entitled 题目是...
3.my learning way 应该是my ways of studying
4.from you应该是for you
5.first那句应该改成
First, it's important to write down the key points on the notebook so that I can memorize them well.(重点用key point)
6. Second, if I have any quetions, I will ask my teachers and classmates.
7. third, in order to train grammar, I keep a diary every week.
8. I hope the methods above will be able to help you.