三句英语是否有语法错误~~~~

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It is consisted of a big island and more than 60 small islands.
When it was established in the year of 1500,there were 100 students.
I take English seriously and try my best to learn it.
上述三句是否有语法错误，如何修改

都有错
It consisted of a big island and more than 60 small islands.
Established in the year of 1500,and there were 100 students in it.
I treat English seriously and try my best to learn it.

从理论上讲都没有错误

（个人认为楼上前两句修改全错，第三句用词不当）