我自己写的一篇英语文章，请高手帮我看看哪儿有不妥的地方~~

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A significant proverb for me~~

There is a proverb---I fear nothing in the face of adversity,because there's no adversity in my dictionery,and what is more, I don't have a dictionery.

U may amused by this proverb by merely taking the first glimpse.But I think dig out some useful idels and tips from this classical proverb is essential for me.I've to analyse this sentence again and again in order to capture some inspirations though it's a bit tough.

Everyone has his or her own living way and living style. Both of them are protected under the promission of legal. Everbody is living individually but they couldn't be isolated or aparted from the others coz the society is consisted by variouty kinds of inhabitants with deep conjunctions.So conmunication of all aspects in daily life are inevitable,and we must occur that conmunicate efficiently is an goal that we shoul chase after.But not everything could be under your control well,

里面是有不少错，不过1楼改了以后错误就更多了，呵呵

U 改成you。最后一段I wanna 后面应该加to,是advertized不是advertice,不是noting是nothing。impossible is nothing完全的中国英语，你是要表达没有不可能吧。英语说法是there is nothing that impossible( to be done)是dictionary不是dictionery

You may (be) amused by this(the) proverb by(when) merely taking the first glimpse而且为什么觉得这个谚语有趣应该说明一下吧。
我就看了开头和结尾，你如果是高中水平不错，如果大学水平赶快练语法吧。
现在的2楼你站着说话不腰疼，你改个试试啊！再说了，我改的错在哪儿，如果错了我认！

There is a proverb---I fear nothing in the face of adversity, because there's no adversity in my dictionary and what is more (furthermore), I don't have a dictionary (ary).

U(You) may (be) amused by this proverb by merely taking the first glimpse. But I think dig(taking) out some useful idels (ideas) and tips (hints) from this classical proverb is essential for me. I've to analyse (analyze/exam) this sentence again and again in order to capture some inspirations though it's a bit (of) tough (hard).

Everyone has his or her own li