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题目：介绍一只你喜欢的小动物，在你的文章里必须包含以下内容：What's its name? How old is it? Where's it from? What does it often do? What does it look like? Why do you like it?
文章；My favorite animal is a little dog.Its name is Congcong.It is one years old,it has white and long hair,and black eyes.My mother gaves it to me last year.It often plays in the grass and sometimes iplay with it.If you ask me :why do you like it?I will answer you:because it very cute.
请大家打分后把语法错误替我指出来，还要告诉我应该怎样改这个语法错误？
in the grass
改成on the grass 较好，在草坪上而不是在草坪里吧
iplay with it.
里面的 i要大写
it very cute
句子缺表语，应该说it is ve
这是初一或小学生作文吧
7分可以打的
it has long white hair
because it is very cute
7分
5分
错误五处以上．
My favorite animal is a little(small) dog.Its name is Congcong.It is one years(year) old,it has white and long hair,(逗号去掉)and black eyes.My mother gaves(gave) it to me last year.It often plays in(on) the grass and sometimes i(I) play with it.If you ask me :why do you like it(why I like it)?I will answer you:because it(it's) very cute.
首先指出语法错误:it is one years old----it is one year old
it has long and white hair---it has long white hair
in the grass----on the grass
because it very cute---because it is very cute
还不错，7分