UC知道急~~急~~急！！哪位高手帮我修改一下英语作文！！
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/04 15:24:40
There is a lot of things have this characteristic in our life. When you need it, it is very important, but when you didn’t need it, it becomes the garbage immediately. The houseplant is one of them. But how to kill a houseplant is a very trouble thing.
The first step is to buy a strong insecticide. To open all of windows in your house and to wear a cloth can protect yourself. Putting on the houseplant in a place where don’t have anything. After these steps completes. You can use the pesticide to spurt the houseplant. You must spurt it about ten minutes until the houseplant will be died. If the houseplant still live after the first step. You can do the second step. You must find a scissors and cut all leaves with it. To put it in the water last three hours. After that, you can take its root very easy. At last, you must call somebody help you clean up the room and throw the root in the garbage can.
The first step is to buy a strong insecticide. To open all of windows in your house and to wear a cloth can protect yourself. Putting on the houseplant in a place where don’t have anything. After these steps completes. You can use the pesticide to spurt the houseplant. You must spurt it about ten minutes until the houseplant will be died. If the houseplant still live after the first step. You can do the second step. You must find a scissors and cut all leaves with it. To put it in the water last three hours. After that, you can take its root very easy. At last, you must call somebody help you clean up the room and throw the root in the garbage can.
第一行是there are，后面你用的是复数，第一句之后的句子中我觉得应该把IT都改成THEM.
倒数第六行，completes去掉S，
倒数第五行，will be died.去掉WILL BE.
倒数第二行，CALL SOMEBODY TO HELP YOU TO CLEAN UP.动词不只一个了。
倒数第二行，throw the root into the
总体来说看着不是很清晰，你倒数第六行写“After these steps completes”但倒数第四行又写“You can do the second step”，你的意思应该是“After these steps completes”里的STEPS应该都属于“The first step”里的吧。
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There are a lot of things .（things是复数，用are）
"When you need it, it would be very important",that would be better. but my friend i do not know why you need to write a article like this . anyway i do not like the topic like you talk about .