下面的英语如何修改比较好?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/06 18:28:13
原文:
Motet comes from France,specialized in making the best bed in the world and devoted to build the healthy bed culture.Since his first handcraft bed was born in Paris,1830,Motet is always the first choice for the nobles...
麻烦帮我看一下如何修改?还有,语法是否有问题,如果有问题请指正,谢谢!急~~

Motet WHO comes from France,specialized in making the best bed in the world and devoted to buildING the healthy bed culture.Since his first handcraft bed was born in Paris,1830,Motet HAS always BEEN the first choice for the nobles...
大写的部分为改正过的,仅供参考~~

没啥问题

很好啊 ,不用改了

我已拿放大镜看过了,一点儿问题也找不出来,hehe~~~