把它翻译成英文好么?

是你原创的歌词？有才呀有才~老外好像没有拉钩的习惯，所以我就翻译成承诺了。我尽量保持着押韵，希望你能喜欢，谢谢~
Time passes, yet space remains
Upon the air, thought echos
Gone, not for long times
Spent with you, is the moments
Emptiness is filling me
To the hole of agony
Lovers in the park, giving each other promise
How can it just be so alike
There's suffocating depression around,
I've lost you in the crowd
I feel in my mind Like a free fall
About the relationship and all
I know, it's not able to change at all
Your image again projects on my sight.
So-called "I will love you forevermore"
It is nothing but lies after all.

Do not take time to bring space
Miss the spread in the air
Not long ago, think of
I accompany you in the side
Now I am next to the air
Our feelings of vulnerability
Park lovers pull the hook
So how the same scenario
Air suppress Chuanbuguoqi
You can not find sea of pe