UC知道帮我的英文日记改改错
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Today，I went to tiantan park with my parents .we saw lots of palaces,they were great. when we wanted to have a rest,a foreigner came and ask me to take her a photo(请我帮她拍一张照片）。I did it ,she thanked me.I was very exciting and said"you are wellcome!"I was so happy because it was I first speak with a foreigner.
a foreigner came and ask me to take her a photo
: a foreigner came and asked me to help her take a photo
I was very exciting
: I was very excited
I was so happy because it was I first speak with a foreigner
: It was my first time to speak with a foreigner, I was so happy.
不要用那么多的从句，尽量先用简单平实的语言把事情说清楚。
a foreigner came and ask me to take her a photo
这句的ask应该改成asked，全文都以过去式来叙述，应该保持时态一致
I was very exciting
这句的exciting应该改成excited，exciting是形容物的，excited才是用来形容人的
it was I first speak with a foreigner
这句应该是it was my first time to speak with a foreigner，无法叙述怎么错了，因为已经不是语法的问题了...
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1.we saw lots of palaces,they were great.改为：we visited a lot of palaces which were great.
2.a foreigner came and ask me to take her a photo.改为：a foreigner came and asked me to take a photo fo