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“Art is a lie that tells the truth.” This is a famous quote by a Spanish painter whose name is Picasso and it demonstrates that to those whom understands no significance, art tend to be defined as the decorated artwork with various appearances which appreciate one’s sense of sight. However, to those whom realizes the application of art and its true meaning, art is like a piece of implicated literary work, a meaningful song, and a rhyming poem that one has to decompose and analyze in order to fully comprehend the message communicated in the art, and only these people know what is the truth that the art is trying to express silently. Other than that, art displays simply as a lifeless and processed object but indicates nothing, as though a lie. A good example for this would be the story “Where Are You Going, Where Have You Been,” by Joyce Carol Oates. The author uses many methods of art to enhance the story and impress the readers. She repeatedly

1、to those whom understands no significance,art tend to be defined...
(1)whom--->who，修饰those的从句中who是做主语，而不是考虑前面是不是有to.
(2)tend to --->tends to,art的动词必须用单数。

2、 However, to those whom realizes the application of art and its true meaning,
whom--->who，理由同上
realizes--->realize

3、in order to fully comprehend the message communicated in the art
in--->by， 不过这里可以不改吧，个人觉得in其实也可以。

4、but indicates nothing, as though a lie.
as though a lie--->as though it was a lie，as though一般是接从句，较少见接名词，接从句时必须用虚拟语气。

5、 The author uses many methods of art to enhance the story and impress the readers.
uses--->used,作者的行为是过去发生的，应该用过去时。

6、She repeatedly applies many motifs to the story, such as music, façade and breath that marks great feelings and impression on readers as they read her literature.
（1）applies--->applied,理由同5
（2）marks--->gave,留下深刻印象，一般不用mark，mark是做标记，而且一般指实物的标记；时态从主