UC知道2008中考英语作文（老师进来）
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Learn from the Hero
_____There was a Wenchuan Earthquake changed many people’s life. thousands of Chinese people died. Many people lost their familys. Many of them were lost themselves. At that time, everyone was afraid of the earthquake, few people was brave. Then, there was a brave boy gave people the lights .He is just nine years old. When the earthequake was happen, he was in class. He wanted to runaway. But he saw there were two students lying on the floor. Though he was no energy to safety, but his kind heart made him to save them. He just didn’t give up when he felt tired. He had to be deeply moved, it made him very hard to move, but it also let him continue to go. What’s a brave boy! At last, he and the other two students all were alive! We can’t think how tired he was, but he said he is very happy.
Helping others wherever you are, and never give up at anytime, this is what the brave boy told us. That let us think: What is the true heart? It’s the kind heart. I think
_____There was a Wenchuan Earthquake changed many people’s life. thousands of Chinese people died. Many people lost their familys. Many of them were lost themselves. At that time, everyone was afraid of the earthquake, few people was brave. Then, there was a brave boy gave people the lights .He is just nine years old. When the earthequake was happen, he was in class. He wanted to runaway. But he saw there were two students lying on the floor. Though he was no energy to safety, but his kind heart made him to save them. He just didn’t give up when he felt tired. He had to be deeply moved, it made him very hard to move, but it also let him continue to go. What’s a brave boy! At last, he and the other two students all were alive! We can’t think how tired he was, but he said he is very happy.
Helping others wherever you are, and never give up at anytime, this is what the brave boy told us. That let us think: What is the true heart? It’s the kind heart. I think
你好我是高一的学生,现在的作文一般采取扣分法.你的有点罗索,所以<<<<<,,并且有几处错误...............对了,上文的 Many of them were lost themselves是什么意思啊!和When the earthequake was happen 有点strange?