我的英文自我评价 请高手帮忙

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/09/24 21:58:03
因为字数原因,英文的删掉了一部分,希望帮我看下语法问题和翻译的是否恰当
中文:曾担任系学生会副主席,承办了两场大型晚会,并举办了多项大型活动,有较强的组织和管理能力,有较强的团队精神,有强烈的进取心、责任心。在施工现场的两年工作经验,磨练了我的个人意志、品质,工作上吃苦耐劳,踏实肯干。熟练使用Office,AUTOCAD等各种常用软件。
为人性格开朗,生活态度乐观、善于和周围的人相处、有较强的交际能力。自学能力较强、易于接受新事物、有很强的适应能力。诚实守信、谦虚谨慎、处世冷静、友善详和、乐于助人、具备较强的亲和力。

英文:I've been Served as vice chairman of the Student Union, and held a number of large-scale activities, have a stronger organization and management ability. Because of the construction site of two years work experience, honed my personal will, practical work hard. I skill use of Office, AUTOCAD and other commonly used software.
I have strong interpersonal skills. Stronger self-learning ability and easy to accept new things. Honest and trustworthy, modest and prudent, friendly and helpful.

held是不是应该改成organised?

Because of the construction site of two years work experience, honed my personal will, practical work hard这句话不太通吧。可不可以改成

the two years experience in constrcution site, strengthen my will ,and make me more hard-working and practical.

I've been served as Vice President of the Student Union and held a number of large activities. I have strong organization and management ability. Due to two years experiences of construction works, it strengthened my personal will and increased my ability to bear with hardships. I'm skilled at using Office, AUTOCAD and other commonly used softwares.
I'm very optimistic, have strong self-learning ability, comfortable at accepting new things. Also, I'm very honest, modest, prdent, friendly and helpful.