帮我看看我的英文个人介绍

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I used to be a monitor, English monitor，minister of the Propaganda department. I also presided some parties and so on.I think I have some leadership and management capacity，I love my work and do it well.

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试试这样：
I was a monitor, English monitor，minister of the Propaganda department,and I also presided some parties and meetings.I believe that I have the capacity of leadership and management.I love my job and will do it well.

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挺好的 就是把宣传部长前面的comma改成 and

我觉得可以用representative 来代替 monitor
你的意思是既是班长，也是英语科代？
用representative 就好了
老外的都是选代表的

我觉得这个个人介绍也太简单了
如果找工作，这个个人介绍说明不了你的具体工作能力
你至少得说明，你到底做过些什么具体的工作
例如多少人的party，你做了些什么
你为什么热爱你的工作？什么工作？

think I have some leadership and management capacity改成
I'm confident of my leadership and management skills.

Propaganda department
用 public relations department 会比较好,否则政治味太浓了.