UC知道雅思作文，麻烦批改评分，谢谢~~
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题目：When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
以下作文：
Since the first industrial evolution, our planet witnessed both a fast-pace development in technology and the fact that traditional skills and living styles are on the edge of being forgotten. Unlike many people’s view that it is useless to reserve traditions, I reckon we should respect our traditions in that they provide us inspiration, pleasure and health.
Traditional life style give us inspirations in many fields such as fine arts, designing, and even modern technology. For many famous artists, illustrating their understanding of traditional value and ways of life is an appealing theme. ‘Back to ancient’ designing style will never out of fashion. Ironically, those who look down upon traditional skills may not believe that these skills sometimes can p
以下作文：
Since the first industrial evolution, our planet witnessed both a fast-pace development in technology and the fact that traditional skills and living styles are on the edge of being forgotten. Unlike many people’s view that it is useless to reserve traditions, I reckon we should respect our traditions in that they provide us inspiration, pleasure and health.
Traditional life style give us inspirations in many fields such as fine arts, designing, and even modern technology. For many famous artists, illustrating their understanding of traditional value and ways of life is an appealing theme. ‘Back to ancient’ designing style will never out of fashion. Ironically, those who look down upon traditional skills may not believe that these skills sometimes can p
我觉得，好像观点有点牵强，我正在看一本环球雅思的老师写的--《十天突破雅思写作》，我觉得伱可以看看他里面介绍的解题思路。（顺便说，我不是托儿啊！）
楼主的词汇和语法还是蛮不错的！
哈哈...
拙见！！
建议你去环球或新东方写作中心买作文纸 100元大概6张（电子版也可以） 你写好的作文可以直接交给专业的老师修改 并批注打分
有些语法错误。词汇不错。总体还可以吧。6--6、5
个人意见