UC知道帮忙看一下下面这段自我介绍怎样。谢谢~
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最好能说说这样介绍自己好不好.谢谢撒~
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the frist,welcome to point out my grammar mistakes .thanks
i'm very glad to introce myself there with my poor english
my name is XXX you can call me XXXX there.i used this name when i was learning ABC ,then i use XXXXX as my english name until the teacher there told me "no,it's not your english name".
so i have to use this name again.but i still use this name sometime in other place
and..i was bron on 19XX.i come from XXhigh school
i even been one of the minsters of school TVstation
i can take my works there if you want to see it
my hobby is every things about computer
i often surfing on the internet
and sometime play the computergames like need for speed , call of duty and age of empires
i also can give you some advince if you want to DIT an computer
tell you the truth.i was shocked when i see someone
introce改为introduce there改为here
i even been one 改为i have been one
我认为then i use XXXXX as my english name until the teacher there told me "no,it's not your english name". 可以删掉
surfing改为surf
advince改为advice
the foreign teachers去掉the
there is hard for me 改成it is hard for me
the first years 改为the first year
using English去掉using
we must can be good friends soon有命令的意思，可改为I sincerely hope we can become good friends soon.
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the frist(First of all),welcome to point out my grammar mistakes .thanks
i'm very glad to introce(introduce) myself there(here) with my poor(weak) english
my name is XXX you can call me XXXX there(去掉).i used（use） this name when i was learning ABC ,then i use XXXXX as my english name until the teacher there(去掉) told me "no,it's not your english name".
so i have to use this name again.but i still use this name sometime（sometimes） in other place(p