UC知道两篇雅思作文希望高手指点
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大作文二 要求忘记了，大概就是说女大学生和男大学生的比例是否需要在大学学科中保持平等。
There is a fact that the proportions of male and female students vary in different subjects. Attentions drawn by this long-existed phenomenon have been accelerating arguments inside our society.
More than ever, a strong voice from UK women rights community, which female students should be provided special priorities in university acceptance, has been supported in a wide-range of places. This proposal is considered to be an effective measurement to reduce sexual discrimination’s rate currently. In addition, a higher percentage of female students in education field would probably create much more innovative and successful outcomes in the near future. This has been taken into research by a group of exporters who are advanced in physical features.
However, the oppositing thoughts are accompanied all the time. Jane, noted commenter in BBC, urged that a purposed interference on subject’s acceptance, could only do nothing positive bu
There is a fact that the proportions of male and female students vary in different subjects. Attentions drawn by this long-existed phenomenon have been accelerating arguments inside our society.
More than ever, a strong voice from UK women rights community, which female students should be provided special priorities in university acceptance, has been supported in a wide-range of places. This proposal is considered to be an effective measurement to reduce sexual discrimination’s rate currently. In addition, a higher percentage of female students in education field would probably create much more innovative and successful outcomes in the near future. This has been taken into research by a group of exporters who are advanced in physical features.
However, the oppositing thoughts are accompanied all the time. Jane, noted commenter in BBC, urged that a purposed interference on subject’s acceptance, could only do nothing positive bu
你写的真的很好，我是很喜欢，我下载给学生当范文了，你无论从词汇量还是每段的单词数上都很好，的确这种双面文章写4段那我提两个建议把，一是，最后一段的字数和第一段的字数反过来就好了，也就是说，最后一段字太多，结尾讲究精炼。还有就是词组数量不多，但如果这是你40min完成的，那你就得多背点固定词组，我要打分就7~8的样子，很不错了
我是雅思考生 我的写作是6
你写的挺好的 感觉比我水品高
在此为你加油吧~