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I feel I grow up a lot, I saw my dad in the hospital. I have a lot of things want to talk with him, but when I saw him. I have nothing to say. I do not know why, maybe I miss him very deeply. I am stay with my dad now, will live with him forever. I do not know how is my father’s problem can be solved. But I think he will be ok. I think will be talk with my father’s lawyers tomorrow for more detail. How is Mrs. Plasket? Where is she right now? I really appreciate for her help and keep my money and passport safe. How about Mrs. Hoaresham? How is she doing in Monte Carl? I think I will visit her one day in the future, thanks for her takes me out of England, she is a nice, smart woman. Jay? I think he is in the gastronomic delights of Wykeham House. I wonder when we can meet next time. He is a nice boy, I want to get marry with him, I do not know why? Just the feeling. I am so tired right now, its feels like I work 100 days in

I have a lot of things want to talk with him去掉want
I am stay with my dad now, will live with him forever.改为I am staying with my dad now, and will live...
how is的is去掉
I think will be talk 改为I will talk
thanks for her takes me out of England改为thanks for her taking me out to England.
its feels 改为it feels