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The students of my class had a discussion about if city people can live pets which like cats and dogs.
Some students hold the idea that don't live pets.They say that pets cause vitiation of environnent spend too much time and energy .besides,it always barks even hurt people.
However,some students hold a completely opposite opinion .They think pets can make the elder happyly,people can get along with animals and add interesting to life.then,we can learn were about animal.
In my opinion,we can live small pets on city.in one way animals which can consort us,in other way it wouldn't hunting someone others.

The students of my class had a discussion about whether citizens should keep pets such as cats and dogs.
Some students hold the idea that don't keep pets.They say that pets cause vitiation of environnent and make their owners spend too much time and energy on them.Besides,pets always bark and even hurt human.
However,some students hold a completely opposite opinion .They think pets can accompany the elder so that making them happily.And people can get along with animals and add interesting to life.Then,we can learn well about animals.
In my opinion,we can live small pets in cities.In one way,animals can consort us.On the other hand,they are our friends.
citizens是市民，我没见过city people这个用法
还有个人认为keep比live好
还有hunt是捕猎，我不认为除了血族还有什么生物能捕猎人类……

of - in
if - whether
can live - could keep
which like - like
hold - held
don't live pets - they could not keep pets
say - said
cause vitiation of environment - could cause