请问这句怎么错了？

most energies and talents?
你想表达什么意思？所有的能量？
most不能这么用
这里要用all of his energies。。。
如果是最大的能量，那应该用maximun

energy, not energies.
took his energy, not took up?
no comma after because.
the flow feels wield. what it is that you are trying to say?

most of his energies and talents

because后面不能跟逗号,most位置不对,应该是
Because the dressing took up most of his energies and talents.

我也没看明白到底要表达什么意思
took up