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Today is Mid-Autumn Festival .we can’t go to school. I fell very excited.
I receive many presents. For example congratulatory calls and letters.
In the new class.I feel very nervous .Because new classmates I don’t recognize.But I have new good deskmate. His name is ZDh I like him very much. Because he studies very well.
I usually ask him questions. He always patient teach me.
September 14th, 2008
Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival.we needn't go to school.I feel very excited. I receive many presents.For example, congratulatory calls and letters. In the new class,I feel very nervous .Because I don’t know my new classmates.But I have a new deskmate.He is good.His name is ZDh and I like him very much. Because his study is very good. I usually ask him some questions. He is always patient with teaching me.
Mid-autumn------the Mid-autumn can't----need'nt fell-----feel
For example------Such as Because-----Because of
classmates-------classmates who have new good----have a good new
ZDh---ZDh and patient teach-----patiently teaches
Mid-Autumn Festival => moon festival;
we can’t go to school=> don't need to go;
I receive=> I have received; congratulatory calls and letters are not presents, they are messages.;
Because new classmates I don’t recogn