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after school had rain
after school

the rain was tack tack

soon

the rain was gusty

I was real Wetlands

but I didn`t angry

today,I had a great time at school

so,I was really happy

I am a Cheerful girl

happy and Pleasure every day

my sky is Calm and sunny

I have a paradise ,Boundless vitality

the sky the paradise

only belong to me.

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