UC知道请帮我修改一下这篇英文短文
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A bear have a shop.One day,a little rabbit came here.She said: "
Excuse me,is there any carrots to sell?" the bear answered : "no! " .
The next day,the rabbit came again,she said: "Excuse me,Is there any carrots to sell?" the bear answered : "no! "The third day,the rabbit came again. she said: "excuse me,is there any carrots to sell?"The bear is very very angry.He said: NO,if you come again,I will cut your ears with Scissor!"the fourth day,the rabbit came again .she said:" Excuse me ,is there any scissor to sell?"the bear said: " no!!!!!! ", “so great! ”the rabbit said: "that I buy carrots”.
请教一下英文的高手，有没有什么错误？特别是时态，怎样改会生动一些？请大家给些意见，另外，小白兔吓得捂着耳朵跑了怎么翻译？
Excuse me,is there any carrots to sell?" the bear answered : "no! " .
The next day,the rabbit came again,she said: "Excuse me,Is there any carrots to sell?" the bear answered : "no! "The third day,the rabbit came again. she said: "excuse me,is there any carrots to sell?"The bear is very very angry.He said: NO,if you come again,I will cut your ears with Scissor!"the fourth day,the rabbit came again .she said:" Excuse me ,is there any scissor to sell?"the bear said: " no!!!!!! ", “so great! ”the rabbit said: "that I buy carrots”.
请教一下英文的高手，有没有什么错误？特别是时态，怎样改会生动一些？请大家给些意见，另外，小白兔吓得捂着耳朵跑了怎么翻译？
A bear runs a shop. One day, a little rabbit came to his shop and said:"Excuse me, is there any carrot to sell?" the bear answered:"no." The next day, the rabbit came again. She said: "Excuse me, is there any carrot to sell?" The bear answered:"no!" The next day, the rabbit came for the third time. She said: "Excuse me, is there any carrot to sell?"The bear gets very very angry. He said: "NO,if you come to annoy me again, I will cut your ears with a pair of scissors!"The fourth day, the rabbit did come again. She said:" Excuse me ,is there any pair of scissors to sell?" The bear said:" No!!!!!! ", "so great! "the rabbit said,"then I want some carrots."
我觉得不要三次都重复那个问题,换一种说法比较好.
这样重复看上去比较不好
如:she asked the same question.
类似这样吧.