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If I were a boy
I wish I were a boy!
I still remembered that when I was a child, my parents ofter said to me “How I wish you were a boy.” Because if I were a boy, my father would not have lost his job, my family would be a good family.
Were I a boy, I would try my best to learn knowledge as much as possible. Because in order to support the family, parents try their best to work hard. I want to let them live a happy life.
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If only I were a boy!
If I were a boy, I would help the girls who need help.
If I were a boy, I would take good care of my love and protect she.
If I were a boy, I would take good care of my parents and my little sister/ brother.
If I were a boy, I would…

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Today, I would rather I had a job.
If I had a job now, I would make much money. However, I am studying in the college. To be frank, I would rather I had a job. Because I think if were at work, I also c

If I were a boy
I wish I were a boy!
I still remembered that when I was a child, my parents ofter（一般后面加现在时，used to） said to me “How I wish you were a boy.” Because if I were a boy, my father would not have lost his job, my family would be a good family.
（If I was，将were I删去）Were I a boy, I would（缩写成I’d会更好） try my best（也可用I’ll spare no effort） to learn knowledge as much as possible. Because in order to（删去in order to，I want/hope）to support the family, parents try（不是过去时吗，tried） their best to work hard.（好像不符语意吧，parents worked so hard that they were too exhausted to enjoy their life and）I want to let them live a happy life.

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If only I were a boy!
If I were a boy, I would help the girls who need help.
If I were a boy, I would take good care of my love（lover） and protect she（her）.
If I were a boy, I would take good care of my parents and my little sister/ brother.
If I were a boy, I would…

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Today, I would rather