请帮我看看这篇英语文章怎么修改好

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Hello everyone,my name is dale.My favorite subjact is math and chinese,I don't like English,because my English is bad.English is very important,so I think I must hard to learn. In the sport,I like soccer tabletennis and badminton,my basketball is as bad as my English.So I never play basketball,it's different for many students.That's all,thank you.
我英语很不好,可是老师让我明天自我介绍,希望大家帮我修改一下上面的文章,谢谢!

有几个错误的地方：
subject
In the sport这个短语不太对，可以说成as to sports,至于运动方面..或者When talking about sports.
I must hard to learn是不对的，改成I must learn harder或相近的表达。

其他地方可以稍微润色一下，表现的比较随便和口语化，不要让自己很尴尬的样子：
Hello everyone,my name is dale.My favorite subjects are math and Chinese.And English is really not my domain,I just don't konw how to deal with it.But I konw English is very important,so I think I will learn it harder. As to sports,I like soccer,tabletennis and badminton.My basketball is just as bad as my English.So I never play basketball,unlike most of other boys.So it's me.I hope we can be friends.Thank you.

自我介绍其实用简单的口语就足够了，从句太多说起来很麻烦，听的人也不容易听懂你在说什么。

恩，不知道你是初中还是高中呢？我来改改吧，我学英语的。我按你的意思把句子转换一下。
Hello everyone, my name is Dale. Math and chinese are my favorite subjects while English is to to my taste. Because the importance of English makes me know that I must work hard on it to improve my poor English.
And the sports I like ar