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Life and cake

Tommy is a nine-year–age boy. He doesn’t usually get good grades in the tests, so teachers and his classmates don’t like him. And he doesn’t have a healthy body, he is always sick, and his family isn’t very rich.
One day, Tommy went into the kitchen and complained to his grandmother.
“Grandma, I think my life is so awful.”
“Why?”
“All my classmates call my names, laugh at me and they make fun with me. And I don’t keep healthy. I always go to the hospital and I have to take a lot of medicine. I can’t have toy cars and toy guns, although I want to have them very much. All in all, nothing lets me feel great in my life. My life is sunless!”
At the same time, grandma began making a cake. She smiled and asked.
“My heart, don’t you want to something delicious to eat?”
“Okay, I’d love to.”
Grandma gave Tommy a bag of flour, and said,
“Eat some flour.”
“That’s not delicious, grandma! Don’t you know that?”<

Tommy is a nine-year–old boy. He doesn’t usually get good grades in the tests, so teachers and his classmates don’t like him. And he haven’t a healthy body, he is always sick, and his family isn’t very rich.
One day, Tommy went into the kitchen and complained to his grandmother.
“Grandma, I think my life is so awful.”
“Why?”
“All my classmates call my names, laugh at me and they make fun of me. And I don’t keep healthy. I always go to the hospital and I have to take a lot of medicine. I haven’t toy cars and toy guns, although I want to have them very much. All in all, nothing lets me feel great in my life. My life is sunless!”
At the same time, grandma began making a cake. She smiled and asked.
“My heart, don’t you want something delicious to eat?”
“Okay, I’d love to.”
Grandma gave Tommy a bag of flour, and said,
“Eat some flour.”
“That’s not delicious, grandma! Don’t you know that?”
“How about some egg white?”