看片英文作文，错的地方帮忙改改，谢谢了

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First of all, English is very interesting, isn't it? When you sing an english song or see an english movie, you really can get some fun.

Secondly,China has already joined in WTO.
There will be more and more chances to meet foreign people.And there will be more and more chances to travel in different countries .

Thirdly, we must admit that there are still much
to learn from others countries, if we just know poor english ,how could we learn?

Fourthly,english not only provides us lots of fun, but also opens up our eyes to another world.

So we should learn English .

作文中不建议使用 isn't it 等反问。

see an english movie
see 改成 watch

joined 就行了
WTO 特指 前面加 the

will be 改成 have
an increasing number of 替换 more and more 或者你有更好的词汇，more and more 太口语化

Fourthly,english 后面+is
开阔眼界用 broaden our horizons 这个是最标准的

每段开头的什么firstly secondly 用得很好，不必换，因为要保持统一。
最后的第四段可以改成Lastly

really can get some fun - can really have a good time
secondly - second of all
joined in - joined
foreign people - people from other countries
travel in - travel to
thirdly - third of all
there are still much - there is still a lot
others countries - other countries
fourthly - last but not least
provides us lots of fun - can provide us with lots of enjoyment
opens - can open
another world - the rest of the world

[I studied in US for 5 years and I am an English teacher. Please feel free to use my essay with no worries]

First of all, Englis