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Nowadays there is a growing trend for individuals to watch TV.However whether we can benifit from watching TV has become an controversial isse.Therefore I am going to analysis both it's disadvantages and advantages.
Individuals can benifit much by making good use of watching television.The average people can gain amusement and entertainment by watching aome sort of TV program,such as soup or pecking opera. Also,learners can broaden their horizon via watching TV. They can easily discover the international and inland current affairs as soon as possible.Moreover,It is a good chance for children to cultivate their creativity and develop their intelligence by watching some program that are suitble for them,such us cartoon.
However,it is undeniable that too much exposure to watch TV may lead to some certern drawbacks. In terms of health,watching TV can easily cause poor eyeslight,which can certainly influence our study and work. On the other hand,watching TV for suc
Individuals can benifit much by making good use of watching television.The average people can gain amusement and entertainment by watching aome sort of TV program,such as soup or pecking opera. Also,learners can broaden their horizon via watching TV. They can easily discover the international and inland current affairs as soon as possible.Moreover,It is a good chance for children to cultivate their creativity and develop their intelligence by watching some program that are suitble for them,such us cartoon.
However,it is undeniable that too much exposure to watch TV may lead to some certern drawbacks. In terms of health,watching TV can easily cause poor eyeslight,which can certainly influence our study and work. On the other hand,watching TV for suc
6到6.5吧，再来些高级词汇，套路隐藏的再好些可以得到...
语法错误嘛，还是自己看吧，考试时6个小错（单词啊，小语法，单复数....）扣0.5分，一个影响句式句意的大错就下一个档次。
你的模板很好...呵呵，不错啦。
自己看吧
现在有一种日益增长的趋势对个人TV.However看我们是否能够受益于看电视已经成为一个有争议的isse.Therefore我要分析双方的缺点和优点。
个人可以受益很大善用观看television.The平均人们可以得到娱乐和娱乐的aome排序观看电视节目，如汤或啄食歌剧。另外，学习者可以拓宽他们的视野通过看电视。他们可以很容易地发现，国际和内陆时事尽快possible.Moreover ，它是一个很好的机会，培养孩子自己的创造力和发展自己的情报看一些计划，是为他们suitble ，例如我们的卡通。
但是，不可否认的是，过多的暴露于看电视，可能会导致一些certern缺点。在卫生方面，看电视可以很容易地造成穷人eyeslight ，可以肯定影响我们的学习和工作。另一方面，看电视等很长一段时间可能会导致一些严重的疾病，使人们成为所谓的“ coath马铃薯。 ”此外，还有一些总是有害信息的支持，电视，如sextual资料或暴力行为，这可能影响儿童的人格。
在权衡所有的优点和缺点，我完全同意，利大于弊它的缺点，我们当然可以享受自己通过看电视。
那里抄的模板？