帮我纠正拼写和语法、时态错误

flys - flies
The National Day - National Day
comes again - is almost here again
lose - lost
in stocks speculation????
So a lot money can not takeing - So you can't take a lot of momey from that account
close - turn off
water heater - the water heater
whole night - the whole night
The National day coming soon - National Day is coming soon
will happy - will have a good time

没分，这也算了，还要命令别人一样，叫别人做作业啊？？？！！请，字都没一个，

It is not hurt to have a look at it. He is just a little boy anyway.