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Toby’s bithday present
Last month, Toby had a birthday party. His parent gave him a present. It was a mobile phone. Toby liked it very much.
Toby thought the mobile phone can help him communicate better with other people. He can use it when he is in trouble or he had something to tell somebody.
At the first, Toby only use it to call his parents. A few weeks later, he found out that the phone has many games. And also, he can send short messages to people. He can’t belive this mobile phone was so nice. One day, Toby received a short nessage from a strange person. It said: " Hello! Are you a boy or a girl ? Ha, you are a lucky person. My name is Jay. Do you know me ? I am very famous. I want to make a friend with you! " Toby was surprised, he liked Jay very much. He is Jay’s fan. So, he wrote a short message quickly. All the evening Toby wrote short messages. He didn’t do his homework. He was excited and very happy. Next day, when he was in calss, every students l

Toby’s birthday present
Last month, Toby had a birthday party. His parents gave him a present. It was a mobile phone. Toby liked it very much.
Toby thought the mobile phone can help him communicate with other people more conveniently. He can use it when he is in trouble or he have something to tell .
At first, Toby only use it to make phone calls to his parents. A few weeks later, he found out that there are many games installed in the mobile phone. And also, he can send short messages to others. He can’t belive that the mobile phone was so wonderful. One day, Toby received a short message from a stranger. It said: " Hello! Are you a boy or a girl ? Ha, you are a lucky person. My name is Jay. Do you know about me ? I am very famous. I want to make a friend with you! " Toby was surprised, he liked Jay very much. He was one of Jay’s fans. So, he reply a short message quickly. All the evening Toby did nothing but send short messages. He didn’t do his homework,