UC知道Problem of Love
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I've really got the blues recently.I've been falling in love with her since I met her for the first time,but I have no chance to acess her,which really make me down in the mouth.
I really couldn't stop missing her beauty,her eyes,her hair...It hanve a bad effect on my study.
What I want to do on earth? Be brave to tell her all of my love or wait for God bless me?
What should I do? I need your help!
请指出我上述语句中的语法，词组等错误，并用英语回答我的问题。
I've really got the blues 是口语用法,我绝对没有用错，意思是 我很郁闷 。 还是请个至少英语6级的人来帮我看看错误吧 口语还要好 make me down in the mouth 也是口语用法 如果你们看不懂 就别评论好了~
I really couldn't stop missing her beauty,her eyes,her hair...It hanve a bad effect on my study.
What I want to do on earth? Be brave to tell her all of my love or wait for God bless me?
What should I do? I need your help!
请指出我上述语句中的语法，词组等错误，并用英语回答我的问题。
I've really got the blues 是口语用法,我绝对没有用错，意思是 我很郁闷 。 还是请个至少英语6级的人来帮我看看错误吧 口语还要好 make me down in the mouth 也是口语用法 如果你们看不懂 就别评论好了~
错误：got the blues我 感觉the改成some会比较好；acess her，in the mouth感觉都怪怪的；It hanve a bad effect 中it改为that.
Be brave to tell her all of my love or wait for God bless me? 改为To be brave to tell her all of my love or waitting for God to bless me?
可能没全改出来，见谅！！
I cann't understand the love you said.But I also think you can do your best to do something .To tell her all of your love.
错误百出,风格不一,估计是你东拼西凑写出来的吧
介于你的水平,我就用中文回答你:
爱是让人幸福的,不要让他让你痛苦
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You wanna send it to a magazine or something?