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Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. My name is Jeffery. Of course, I also have a Chinese name, Xiao Jun.
But, please call me Jeffery. I’m a sales manager of double A photo frame company in South-Africa.
Today, let me introduce our product to you, a wooden photo frame.
It is made of fifteen chopsticks.
You can see fourteen pieces in the front, and one at the back to support the whole frame. This stent can be demolished.
Then, I painted it with brown lacquer.
You can put any kinds of photos inside. Such as a living photo, a marriage photo or a portrait.
It was designed and made by myself and take me 2 hours to complete this.
You should know what a challenge this is for a young man!
It’s not only beautiful but good for the environment as well.
If you are interested in my work, No matter which wireless company you're using, China mobile, China Unicom or Little Smart, you can contact me on XXXXXX
But, please call me Jeffery. I’m a sales manager of double A photo frame company in South-Africa.
Today, let me introduce our product to you, a wooden photo frame.
It is made of fifteen chopsticks.
You can see fourteen pieces in the front, and one at the back to support the whole frame. This stent can be demolished.
Then, I painted it with brown lacquer.
You can put any kinds of photos inside. Such as a living photo, a marriage photo or a portrait.
It was designed and made by myself and take me 2 hours to complete this.
You should know what a challenge this is for a young man!
It’s not only beautiful but good for the environment as well.
If you are interested in my work, No matter which wireless company you're using, China mobile, China Unicom or Little Smart, you can contact me on XXXXXX
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You should know what a challenge this is for a young man! 建议删去should.