帮我看看这篇英语演讲稿,改正错的地方

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/11 05:27:50
Hello everyone. I’m here you tell you about one of my dreams,it was a scary but meaningful story
I got up in a normal morning, put on my special clothes and mask. So that I can breathe safely. I went downstairs and took a glance at the calendar: it was April 22nd, 2020.I went into the kitchen, poured my self a cup of coffee. Then I used a cleaning machine to clean some water. And I was ready to go to work. Suddenly, everything became abnormal. The man-made birds in the cages shut their mouths, The wind started to blow hard and the sky went dark. Behind the man-made trees, the clouds scudded frantically across the sky. Every few moment the moon ripped through them, creating wraith-like shadows that raced along the ground. I Sighed,After all these years, the Earth can’t stand us anymore.” .Suddenly, huge waves started to rush to my house, I ran up stairs to the attic bedroom, wrapped myself in an old blanket, with the scary sound of the wave, the wind and people’s scream , I shook,

I’m here you tell you about one of my dreams.
:I’m here to tell you about one of my dreams.

写得不错啊,只有些拼写错误
used a cleaning machine to clean some water.
:used a cleaning machine to clean some clothes.

more and more sirous
:more and more serious

The futue it never stable
:The futue never stable