UC知道帮我改正一下这篇初中英语小作文.
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People's life are changed better.In the past,people also poor.because the fiance not developed.the family is big.commonly, every family has only one child now.and the traffic is faster.the education is better.almost everyone can go to school..people are getting healthier.because madicine is advanced.there are less illness.so people can live longer than they did.but there are many junk food now.but I think pollution of the enviroment is very serious.the air doesn't clean.and we only can play at home.we only can play computer, watching tv.in the past,we can play in the big and spacious playground.
but In my opinion, i think that the present has politically progressed than the past. the living has improved.
今晚来收答案..谢了
我问了两次.这篇的最佳答案还可以贴到另一篇.那里有些悬赏分.http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/47158008.html
Now and then
People's life is changeing better.In the past,people were poor,because the finance didn't develop much.The family was big.Commonly, there is only one child in each family now.And the traffic is better.The education is better as well.Almost everyone can go to school.People are getting healthier,because madicine is getting more and more advanced.There is less illness.So people can live longer than they did before.But there are many junk food now.But I think enviroment pollution is very serious.The air is not clean.And we can only play at home.We can only play computer, watch TV.In the past,we can play in big and spacious playground.
But in my opinion, I think that the present has politically progressed much than before.Life has been improved.
拜托，都是语法错误……软件写的作文吧？
下面是经过修改的：
Now and then，
people's live became better.In the past,people were poor,because of the fiance wasn't developed very well.Also,people's family wer