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today my topic is lost and lost
last weekend my family lost the communication with my father,i had so sad in this problem and my monther felt so tired to my father i worried about them very much and i cant do anything about this.so i thinking and thinking how can i help them and my firend give a suggestion they tell me to ask my father what is his hinder but he didnt answer me nothing and he has angry every day now....how can i fount the communication to my family and what is my fathers hinder?

My topic was lost and lost today
Last weekend my family lost and my father's communication, i like this worry in this problem and my month to drive very for they worry of I of father i feel thus tired, and the Iis hypocritical to talk to take action to this.So I think and miss me how to can help them and my friend to provide 1 to suggest.They tell I the father who asks me what is his behind, but he can't answer me, and he gets angry everyday of now....I how can find out the communication to my family, and my father why behind?